welcome back, my friends, to the edit that never ends

Editing Driving Lessons some more. Really missing the funny in some places– it’s harder than it looks. And what the hell was I thinking, concocting a word like “mythofecalconfectionate”? Get over yourself, Pen– come back from the weeds.

This is revision 4 of the on-amazon presence of the story. I also redid the description, which is a struggle in its own right. “Write good ad copy for your own stuff, wouldya?”

Anyway. Onward and upward. Or, further up and further in, for those in True Narnia.